Friday, November 30, 2012
Wednesday, November 28, 2012
Sade williams
November 28, 2012
Ms.Coleman
2nd Block
Things that i would wear...
Now this is what I will not wear.....
My thoughts on fashion...
I feel that fashion has gone out of control. Girls starting
to wear he ugly cheetah pants WITH UGGS. They starting to wear shorts WITH
UGGS, like who thinks that cute. Why have worn feet and cold legs that jus doesn’t
make any since to me. I also feel that everyone wants to look like each other. There
are curtain things that I wear that other people wear, and their are curtain
thins that I wear that other people don’t wear and its no because its out of
style, it’s because I don’t dress like every one else, I try to look like my
own person. Yes I would love to dress like my favorite artist but that’s there
swag why would I want to still that from them. Here the one that came out with
the style or them so they can wear it and be happy in their clothes, but then
you have people in the world who want to look just like them, so they go and
buy clothes and dress up like the famous artist. I feel like people should
dress in their own style instead of seeing someone else with it on and stealing
it because that’s what there doing. I don’t think I could ever do that I wouldn’t
know what to do with myself. I just have to dress like me I can’t dress like
any one else.... and that’s my thoughts on fashion in the world of 2012.
Tuesday, November 27, 2012
first i would like to say ... OBAMAAAAAAAAA YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!. now, at first i didnt think obama was going to win because romney got north carolina, but i was wrong clearly.. honesly im speechless
-sade williams
Review your post about the presidential election and use rubric below to grade yourself. Copy and paste your post and the rubric into a word document and print it out. Be honest with yourself and grade only according to the rubric. This should take no more than about 10 minutes. When you have completed the assignment turn it in.
My grade for this would be a 3 one because its too short but it makes a vrey good point, I think.
-sade williams
Review your post about the presidential election and use rubric below to grade yourself. Copy and paste your post and the rubric into a word document and print it out. Be honest with yourself and grade only according to the rubric. This should take no more than about 10 minutes. When you have completed the assignment turn it in.
Phase 3: (October 8-October 31)
Primary Focus: (Elaboration of Evidence & Sentence Increase)
Low Stakes Writing Rubric
0 points are earned for responses not attempted
Criteria
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1=Minimal
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2=Adequate
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3=Strong
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4=Outstanding
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Topic Sentence
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No evidence of a clear topic; no beginning; key words are not near the beginning
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Is semi- defined; it attempts a beginning but is ambiguous or lacking clarity
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Is good but is not informational, interesting, or compelling
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Is informational, interesting, or offers a compelling start to the paragraph; well-stated
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Supporting Evidence: Reasons and Examples
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Does not utilize prompt to provide evidence or provides inappropriate evidence that is unsupported; not referenced
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There is insufficient evidence to support the topic; no clear link to how the evidence cited correlates to the topic
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Provides appropriate evidence to support the idea presented in the topic sentence; clearly cites the prompt
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Provides appropriate and sufficient evidence to support the idea presented in the topic sentence; skillfully elaborates
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Elaboration of Evidence: Analysis and/or Reflection
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Elaboration of evidence is minimal, absent, in error, or irrelevant
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Elaboration of evidence includes weak or partial response to the topic
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Elaboration of evidence demonstrates some depth but may be general or inconsistent in relationship to the topic. Some elaborative techniques are included such as: analysis, reflection, and/or presentation of new/unique idea
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Elaboration of evidence demonstrates excellent depth that is specific and relevant to the topic. It consists of effective use of a variety of elaborative techniques, which could include:
· analysis
· reflection
· presentation of new/unique idea
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Mechanics
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Many spelling, grammar, punctuation errors: sentence fragments; incorrect use of capitalization
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3 or fewer spelling and grammar errors; most sentences have punctuation and are complete; uses upper-and lowercase
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2 or fewer spelling and grammar errors; correct punctuation; complete sentences
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Correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation; complete sentences; correct use of capitalization
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Number of Sentences
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1-3
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4-5
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6-7
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8+
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Monday, November 26, 2012
my thanksgiving was pretty good . i went to lexingtion to my aunts house this year. she made the best white only pie i ever had. my mom like always made the banana pudding that was too good. i mad some sweet patatoe for the first time and it was actually good, i tastd it an everything. the only sad part about thanksgiving was that i got a call from my honey and she told me that they were nmot letting them write yet. that kind of made me sad because i was hoping to get a letter from her this week, but the best part about that is that they get atleast one call a week. i feel thats better then writing, i would rather hear her voice then see a letter. well thats how my thanksgiving was ohohoh of course you know my birthday was yesterday yaaaay 18 finally =)
Tuesday, November 20, 2012
what is this music that these children listen to these days? no the question really why are these kids listenin to this music, it has no meaning to it like cheef keef<<<< who is that? what is that? there is a new song her has out that is so stupid, no idont know the name of it bu the song its self is so stupid lilke why would you even want to produce a song like that i just dont understand. first it was "dont like" ok i understand that sont he does not like curtain things but who cares what you dont like , where not here to listen to what you dont like because we dont care well i dont care. anyways , on to the next artist lil wayne , o lord why is he still making music, he is so played out but yet and still he has a new song out or maybe not his song he is on somone ele's song "no worries". well if i made horrible usic like him i wouldent have any worries either. i just don understand . kids walk around singing and rapping these songs like there the best of the best that ever came out. HELLO PEOPLE ITS NOT. what these need to listen to is people like eminem, or jay-z or tyler the creator, or even j cole peaople that acually talk about something in there music. they dont just talk about money girls and cars the talk about bout whats happaning in this world, what they had to go through to get where they are now. i just want all these new rappers that dont talk about nothing to just sit down and let the rappers who acually have a purpose for rapping do thier job. and im done =)
Sade Williams
November 14, 2012
Ms. Colman
2nd block
Prince“Rogers” Nelson
Prince was born June 7th1958 in Minneapolis, Minnesota. His given name is Prince Rogers Nelson, stage name just prince. He has a sister named Tyka Nelson; they don’t really talk like that only because there family is not that close. He also has a son named Boy Gregory Nelson. Prince wen to john hay elementary school, Bryant junior high school, central high and north high school, no collage education. At 14 prince was in a band called grand central. He singed a management contract at the age of 17 with Owen Huskey who is responsible for bringing him to Warner Brothers Records. Prince was given creative control of the first three albums and ownership of production rights. Prince is seen as the greatest musician and guitar player in the music history. He was also in “Time” magazine as one of the 100 most influential people in the world. He also won seven Grammy Awards, a Golden Globe Award and an Academy Award.
i don' think people acually know he concept of of dancing or even the meaning of it. dancing is not ony the most powerfulest thing you could eve learn how to do it is the most funnest "somewhat type sport" that a person could ever do. ipesonally love to dance and some day would like to become a world wide choreorapher. it has always been my dream to not only become a choreographer but the best you could ever have. id olnt know what it is about dancing that i love, i believe its the adrinallin that i get from it, i dont know but i love it.
-S.williams
to be honst with you ms. C i dont even know what im goin to blog about . nothing major has really happend in my life that is exciting. i didnt really read this weekend so i dont have a book to talk about , i know you dont wanna hear about how i miss my love so i dont know what to blog about . so ummm yea
-S.Williams
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